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Chapter 4
Derek fell back against his seat as the
General's word's echoed in his mind, “If
we are ever going to launch the Fellcamp Mission, it's now or never.”
He
forced himself to listen to the rest of the conversation to be sure
he'd actually heard what the General said. Something like this
couldn't afford to be mistaken for something else.
The
old General puffed cigar smoke into the air, filling the limousine
with a sweet smell that made Derek nauseous. He never could get used
to that kind of smoke.
One
of the dark skinned men leaned forward, resting his folded hands on
the table in the middle of the car and let out a forced cough. “We
thought you were coming to hold a meeting to discuss the possibility
of a Code Blue.”
Buckeimer
laughed, setting the cigar down on a rest. “Gentlemen, really. Do
you think I would have come this far, this fast with this little if
we were simply going to discuss the idea of this?”
“This
may not be the best time, General.” The other of the dark skinned
men, who Derek noticed to be very small, said.
“The
time is now, Nateel!” The German slammed his fist down on the
table. “This is the only time for it! Everything is lined up. The
charts all match perfectly. And if we don't do it now...” He broke
himself off in the middle of his sentence and leaned back again with
a pained expression in his face.
“What
is it, General?” Nateel asked.
“Nothing.”
The old man shook his head, the fat under his chin jiggling like
jello. “This is the only time to make it work. As I said before, it
is now or never. I need you men to trust me.” He glanced around at
each of the faces, surprising Derek by looking at him too and holding
his gaze for a moment. “The boy is ready. No matter how much I will
always doubt any and every man on this earth, I know that the boy is
as ready as any of them could be. He will make this work.”
“Sir,”
the larger of the foreign men leaned forward, reaching for a bottle
that sat in the middle of the table and proceeding to poor himself a
glass of the drink. “It is not that we doubt you, but our chief is
no longer certain the the benefit for us would outweigh the enormous
risk factor that we did not know of until last week.”
“Radeeb
need not fear for his people or his island,” Buckeimer said,
picking his cigar back up. “Their safety will be as ensured as that
of the German nation's.”
“How
can we be sure?”
“No
man can be sure of anything in life, Sael. This is where you must
trust me.”
Nateel
leaned forward again and shook his head. “It is too risky. Radeeb
won't consent without more proof that you and your men will do all in
their power to ensure the safety of our people and land.”
“Have
we not done enough?” Buckeimer shouted. “We have already kept
your island secret from any sort of satellite or tracking device. As
far as the entire world is concerned, your island doesn't even exist!
You're the invisible people! How much more of a guarantee does your
chief need? Do you have any idea what kind of money and technology it
takes to do something like that?”
“Allow
me to point out, General,” Sael said, “that all of this has been
done in such a way as to make this mission of yours most convenient
for you.
It is hard to see the sacrifice from our point of view since, without
our island and it's...invisible qualities, your precious Fellcamp
Mission would never work”
“I
can't believe what I am hearing!” Buckeimer slammed his hand down
on the table again. “If it had not been for us finding your island
when we had, it would have been blown to pieces in our test launches
on the United States! Our missiles would have ripped right through
the core of your little piece of land and nobody would have been any
the wiser! We have had to reconfigure our entire system, which is no
small task I might add, to keep you safe!”
Nateel
broke in calmly, but with a firmness that Derek would not have
suspected from a man of such small stature. “Do not forget,
Buckeimer, that this became the case only when you realized that our
island would expand your plan to more than just America. That it
would allow you to begin a true world domination and, not only this,
but that our island was set up perfectly for you to build your
compounds and training camps on. Not to mention the fact that, with
our island being invisible to the rest of the world, you could hide
there and be virtually impenetrable without having to build any sort
of armor, except that which is needed to protect the force-field.”
“With
you by my side! With Radeeb as my equal in power! We are not enemies!
We are allies with the same dreams!”
“This
is your dream, General.” Nateel kept a firm gaze fixed on the now
trembling German. “Radeeb's is to simply better his land and his
people's life. We have lived off the land for quite some time very
comfortably. The only time we have ever had rumor of war or any kind
of real trouble was when you came into the picture with your plans.”
Buckeimer
opened his mouth to reply, but Sael cut in before he could say
anything.
“I'm
sorry, General. But, Radeeb has instructed us to inform you that we
are pulling our support and thus, the land and people we have
supplied for you. We can not, do not, and will not aid you in this
bloodthirsty endeavor.”
Derek
saw Buckeimer's face grow red as he said, through clenched teeth, “It
seems that you forget that I have nearly as many people on your
island as you do. And mine have weapons much more advanced than your
hunting rifles and cross bows. I could simply begin with your little
island as a practice run in my tactics for world domination.” He
leaned back in his seat and resumed puffing in his cigar again. “Give
that to Chief Radeeb to chew on.”
Great chapter! I love the conflict, and I really love the last line. Perfect ending, and it adds a confident tone to the General's demeanor. Really great work on this one! It held my attention all the way through and raises lots of questions. :D
ReplyDeleteI only noticed one thing:
ReplyDelete" The other of the dark skinned men, who Derek noticed to be very small, said." There is a long pause between 'the other dark skinned man' and 'said'. It kind of draws me out. Maybe if you take out the part in between and put them somewhere else, it might help.
But that was all. You kept me very interested and I agree with Eli about the last sentence. :D