And, the last thing before getting to the prologue...here are pictures of my characters. :) (All image credit goes to Getty Images.)
Margaret Evangeline White (Or Maggie) |
Reed Matthew Warren |
Prologue
Maggie glided down the sidewalk, gripping her steaming
pumpkin latte and smiling at everyone she passed as if they were each her best
friend in the world.
The
crisp, autumn air snatched at her chin length, golden brown hair and whipped it back along with her silver
hoop earrings.
“Not
too shabby,” she whispered as she caught a glimpse of herself in the reflection
of a window shop display. And she almost had the right, too. At eighteen years
old she was already in her second year of Music College and steadily making her
way to the top of her class. Everything had been almost perfect, but just a few
minutes before, life had shifted into completely perfect when she’d gotten the
call that the job at the studio was hers. Now she would have the chance to meet
the right people and that meant that her dream of singing stardom was finally
possible.
But
then, the smile on her face faded as her memory locked onto the conversation
she’d had with her mom that morning as they ate breakfast in the kitchen
together.
“Dave
called for you again,” her mom said.
“Yeah,
I know.”
“Why
don’t you call him back?”
Maggie
shrugged as she pored a stream of milk into her bowl of granola.
“Did
he ask to date you?”
“Mom,
every guy in the neighborhood has asked to date me.”
Her
mother shook her head. “Honey, I know that your career is important to you, but
if you wait for too long to get into a relationship, it’s going to be too
late.”
“Oh,
come on, Belle.” Maggie’s father chuckled as he shuffled into the kitchen and
went to the fridge, sporting his bathrobe and slippers. “She’s only eighteen.
Give her some time.”
“Do
you know where you’d be right now if I took that advice at her age, Jim?”
Maggie
couldn’t help grinning as she watched Belle throw her arms around her husband’s
neck and give him a kiss.
“No,
where?” He said, one arm around his wife’s waste and the other reaching into
the fridge for a yogurt.
“Certainly
not with me!” Belle laughed, pulling herself free from his grasp and walking
back to where Maggie sat at the bar, swallowing a mouthful of cereal.
“Mom,
I’m different, okay? Marriage is fine for you, but I want to make something of
myself.”
Belle
flinched at the ignorantly heartless statement. “I’m just saying that if you
ever intend to get married, you need to let yourself be more open to the idea
now rather than later. You’re a pretty girl and everyone knows it. But, you’re
more than that and I’m afraid that if the right guy came along now, you’d miss
him.
“Well,
maybe I don’t intend to ever get married.”
~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.
Reed’s
eyes lit up as she he saw her come out of the coffee shop. “That’s her, Billy!”
He said, smacking his buddy on the back, sending Billy’s mouthful of orange
juice spewing on the sidewalk.
“Reed!
What the heck are doing, man?” Billy asked, shaking the liquid off of his
hands. “Look at me! I’ve got a job interview in less than an hour. What is
wrong with you?”
Reed
didn’t seem to take any notice of his friend’s distress, but kept his gaze
glued to the girl who pranced down the opposite sidewalk like Windy from the
old 60’s song.
“Reed?”
Billy looked up and rolled his eyes when he saw Reed’s expression.
“That’s
her, Billy.” He repeated, dreamily.
“Dude,
if you like her that much, why don’t you talk to her?”
Reed
shook his head. “She’d never talk to me.”
“What
makes you so sure? Every other girl in your class will.”
“Yeah,
but those girls are different.”
“What
do you mean?”
“They’re
all alike. They’ll flirt with anyone who might take their disgusting bait.”
“What
makes you think she is different?”
“I
kinda, well…I mean….I kinda looked her up.”
“What,
you mean you stalked her?” Billy laughed.
“No,
I just went on her facebook.”
“How?
You don’t have a facebook.”
“I
do now.”
“What?”
Reed
watched as the girl stopped and looked at a window display. “I’ve gotta talk to
her, man.”
“Dagum!
What a brilliant idea!” Billy shook his head. “Want me to come with you?”
Reed
straightened to his full height of 6’ 2” and shook his head. “Nope, I’ve got
this.”
~.~.~.~.~.~.
“Well
of course she yelled at you, Reed!” Billy shouted over the phone at his
distraught friend. “What did you expect?”
“I
don’t know! You’re the one who told me to go talk to her!”
“Yeah,
I said talk to her! Not dump a cup of ice water on her! Good grief, man. I
don’t know what you were thinking!”
“Well,
I couldn’t just walk up and talk to her. I had to get things started somehow!”
“Dude,
seriously? There are way better ways to get to talk to a girl.”
Reed
sat back and sighed. “I’ve never tried to talk to one.”
“What,
you’re saying that you’re nineteen years old and you’ve never tried talking to
a woman?”
“I
don’t play that game, Billy. It shouldn’t be like that. This is something to be
taken seriously and…”
“Okay,
look. It’s late. I’m exhausted. I wish I could help you out, but-“
“Wait,
just tell me what to do tomorrow.”
“Well,
you could start by apologizing.”
“You’re
right.” Reed let out a drawn out sigh and closed his eyes. “I’m sorry, Billy.”
“Not
to me, you egghead! To her!”
“Oh…right.”
~.~.~.~.~.~
“Is
Margaret White here?” Reed fiddled with the top button of his shirt as he asked
the receptionist at the recording studio.
Before
the girl had a chance to answer, Maggie walked around the corner, holding an
armful of paperwork. She shot one glance towards Reed, then turned to dash out
of the room, but he called after her.
“Wait!
Please.”
She
stopped and turned around.
“Can
I talk to you for a minute?”
Maggie
puckered her lips in amusement as she looked the character in front of her up
and down. His hair was only half a shade darker than hers and cut neatly,
though still long enough to swoop down to his eyes. His eyes were blue-grey and
he was built more like a farmer than a city boy. He struck her as more of that
type, too. And something about that annoyed her just enough to make him
intriguing.
“I
guess.” She sat the stack of papers down and walked out from behind the desk.
She
went and sat down on a couch in the lobby and looked up at him. He hadn’t taken
a single step, but just stood there with his hands buried in his pockets as he
watched her.
She
raised her eyebrows. “Care to sit down?”
“Oh,
uh…sure.”
Maggie
thought she caught a slight southern accent in his tone, but maybe that was
just because he looked like he should have one.
He
sat down on the opposite end of the couch and looked past her, out the window.
“Hey,
I don’t mean to be rude.” Then she mumbled, “not that I don’t have a reason to
be.” And speaking up again, “but I’m kind of in the middle of a few things,
so…”
“Oh,
yeah.” Reed looked at her. “I just, well…I really just came to say I am sorry
for yesterday. I wasn’t…I mean…I shouldn’t have…you see…”
“I
think I get it.”
“No!
It’s not like that.”
“Like
what?”
“Uh,
well…” Reed shifted. “Do you like dinner?”
Maggie
blinked and looked at him. “Excuse me?”
Reed
smacked himself mentally. This was not going the way he’d planned. He seemed
like every shallow guy out there hunting for a toy when that was the last thing
he was looking for. “Oh, nothing, really.” He stood up and looked down at her.
“Just wanted to say I was sorry and hope there’s no hard feelings.”
He
turned and began to walk towards the door, but Maggie jumped up and said,
“Hey!”
He
turned to see her look down at the floor. “Um, I-I do like dinner.”
~.~.~.~.~.~
Belle
sat in the living room a few nights later reading her Bible when Maggie stormed
in and threw her keys on the coffee table. Her pink, knee length dress had a stain all the way down the front of the skirt.
Her
mother closed the Book and leaned forward, musing, “So…how was dinner?”
“Mom!”
Maggie shouted. “Reed Warren is the clumsiest, stupidest man in the entire
world!”
“What happened, sweetie?” Belle
suppressed a laugh. “Maybe you just need to get to know him better. I really
like him. And so does your Dad.”
“But, he’s so, so…he just…I hope I
never see that man again!”
I love this. It's so cute and endearing and please write more soon. ;)
ReplyDeleteI might! ;)
DeleteSo far I am in love with it. Reed is awesome. So awkward and unsure of himself.
ReplyDeleteHaha, awesome. 8-) Thanks, Doll. :)
DeleteWell, I laughed. :P Like, twice. Reed was halarious, and I got a kick out of him talking to Billy and Billy calling him an egghead (that was a particularly amusing phrase. Never heard it before) and also when he asked her if she liked dinner. So awkward. :P I thought it was great.
ReplyDeleteWritten any more, yet?
Well, that's good. I realize that it won't be a flew blown comedy...but maybe it can still be lighter than my other work. Not that that'd be hard. :P
DeleteThanks. :)
Not much...at all. Kinda...IDK...I get excited about a book until I start writing it...then it gets discouraging. I started another one, actually and I plan to go between the two and see how that works and if it helps with motivation.
Hmm. I have tried this. It worked okay for me, for a while. Don't be discouraged, though. This is good stuff. Not typically what I read, but the writing is very good and it's funny. Genuinely funny.
DeleteI'm not clear on one thing, though...Reed actually threw water on her to get to talk to her? Reminds me of a guy I know. Who did something like that with water for similar reasons. Foolish fellow.
Yeah, we'll see. I think if I can just get into the story...four or five chapters, I'll get to where I can finish it. Well, thanks. :)
DeleteUh...yeah. He did. Was it unclear in the story?
Haha. Now that's funny. :P He sounds like a total nut. I can imagine how the girl felt.
Chapters always work better when they're posted. Just sayin'.
ReplyDeleteI just wasn't sure if he actually did it, or if it was just a figure of Billy's speech.
Yes, yes...true. But, I don't have anymore of this written...I'm working on the last thousand or so words for my other book's first chapter now.
DeleteAh, okay...maybe I'll figure out how to fix that. Maybe change what Reed does...I was just writing and that was the first thing that came to mind. :P
I shall comment on both of the stories you posted.
ReplyDeleteReed and Maggie: I love Reed and Billy! :) This story doesn't have much action and adventure that I like, but it kept me interested... (so far :P)and it made me like the characters right off. :)
Melody and Jason: I love Jason! He is a great brother! I am still not sure what I think about Melody yet. It felt a little fast pace until we got on the plane, then it kind of slowed down a bit and I could see a little better and got a little more interested.